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Friday, May 21, 2021

the cyclone

Hi reader this week we had 6  book that we could choose from i pick the cyclone book. Ring ring there is a cyclone tokotoru is headed your way this weekend  my dad said on the phone he giggle he put the phone down and turned to me kuia expecting us on friday maioha ka pai i said i’ll  tell toihau and hikitia after school on friday we headed off to kuia when we arrived the sun was setting against a fiery red sky kuia always say red sky at night me it will be a good day then we went inside and made a big mess grama sadi has a cyclone has attack us you


1 comment:

  1. Hi Kamyar
    Nice work. I like your summary of the story, you have a lot of detail in there.Your poster is good too. Maybe you could add some pictures in there in future. Good job Kamyar. Michelle

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