Hey Kamyar, I enjoyed reading about Brazil & Sophie Pascoe. I think if you proof read your completed task on Brazil, you'd agree that it needs some punctuation. Maybe include some photos next time, if you do this type of task again. Have you been watching Sophie Pascoe recently in the paralympics, she has done amazingly well.. Looking forward to seeing some more blog posts from you & I hope you've been staying safe & active over lockdown.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows: 1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared. 2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language. 3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question. Encourage me to make another post!
Note: Only a member of this blog may post a comment.
Hey Kamyar,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading about Brazil & Sophie Pascoe. I think if you proof read your completed task on Brazil, you'd agree that it needs some punctuation.
Maybe include some photos next time, if you do this type of task again.
Have you been watching Sophie Pascoe recently in the paralympics, she has done amazingly well..
Looking forward to seeing some more blog posts from you & I hope you've been staying safe & active over lockdown.