One storming night I went outside. as the ship was moving it began to get darker then strike a thunderstorm happen in a blink of an eye. Then another, we all started to get pale will watching the thunder. WE saw some destroyed ships. The captain shouted to move the boat! And then there was a hole in the ship. We all had a feeling there was no hope for us until a light shield in our eyes. We all shouted yea, and then the caption said this light want save us we have 5 small boats! We can all go in it. We all move to the 5 small boats and then get saved.
Hi Kamyar
ReplyDeletevery cool piece of writing,reading it feels like you on board the ship an living it along with them good work Kamyar.
Hi Kamyar,
ReplyDeleteI was keen to read more..
How were you saved? You mentioned 'a light shone in your eyes'. Were you rescued by 5 bigger boats? Just a couple of spelling mistakes, but I'm sure you would've picked these up if you had done a proof read.
Thanks Kamyar, great writing!